Feedback on “Animation“ (Tween)

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#1

Hello!

I am currently making a FNAF fangame.

I’m just gonna go over the animation quickly and give context.

The game is a meme/humor/ironic game.
In the game, I have a character that eats sunscreen (not real, just a soda). His mechanic is during the night you have to go from your office, in a vent to the kitchen, place a bottle there and go back.
I previously made these « animations » work before but I didn’t use Tween before, now I am.

Info on the tween:

  • EasingSyle: Back
  • EasingDirection: Out

Order of actions:

  1. The player turns to his left. He can go back.
  2. The player picks a bottle. (The joke is it’s not sunscreen but like a soda). The player can still turn back.
  3. The player goes in the vent and goes to the kitchen at the small table.
  4. The player can: put the bottle, turn to the left to look around and turn back.
  5. Once placed, the player goes back into his office.
  6. The cycle repeats itself.

Video:

This is step 1, the player turns to his left (looks down) and can turn back.

I also made a Tween animation for step 4 (turning around):


(This is when the bottle isn’t placed)


(When it is placed)

I will remake the step 3 and 5 soon. Before/currently what I’m doing without Tween is basically this:

local CameraPart = game.Workspace.CameraPart
–This is from memory, as of right now. I am in online school. It’s break as of writing this.

CameraPart.Position = CameraPart.Position.Vector3.new(0, 5, 0)
wait(0.001)
–Repeats itself. Yeah that’s why I should use TweenService.

I also considered of adding an office chair.

Please give feedback on my Tween Animation.
Thanks for reading

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#2

Does the character hate the sun or something

Not bad, although I’m not sure if it’s just me but it feels like there’s something off about them like there’s not much “emphasis” (I guess would be the word?) Put into it

Don’t take it the wrong way the Tweens looks REALLY nice but the videos with the bottle make it feel a bit strange, I suppose it could be the environment on how the place looks? Still good regardless though :thinking:

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#3

I didn’t finish building everything yet, so I know it’s a bit dead inside. I plan to add posters and more things like details on the walls, decorations etc.

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#4

Yeah, just thought I’d point that out so you knew about it

Tweens have a nice start though I will say that!

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#5

So I remade the Anim for moving, exept I have a problem. I made a post about it.