After spending so much time on this, I’m not sure I’ll be able to actually work out any suggestions unless they can be done quickly, but I’d still like to know others’ opinions and how this might effect players’ impressions of the game.
So if anyone is up to it, please let me know:
How do you think of the image (Good, bad, somewhere inbetween)? Honest opinions please
How might I improve it? (e.g. better image quality, different colors, etc.)
If you saw this image in front of a game, how would you think of the game? (e.g. cool, cheap, noobish, etc.)
Would you be less likely to play the game?
Last of all, I’d like to point out- ‘Art Design’, or specifically image editing, is not really something I have much practice or interest in. So please don’t set your standards too high.
for the font - 7/10 - font is the strongest as it has so much potential to work on the placement on where it goes (for example, the 4k studios would be better watermark than anything in my opinion).
for the drawings - 5/10 - they look way to blocky and not realistic to the roblox avatars we have now but look good with the facial expressions and cars work well into the favor of it the way it looks.
overall - 8/10 - Everything that can be fixed is looking at examples and reference images and made to the way it looks and how it can be improved apon and how it works into the drawing realism of how roblox looks.
Other than that it looks good to me.
-Attacky
As I said in my post, the image- or specifically the avatars and cars- are supposed to look cartoon-like, not realistic.
Thanks for the feedback, though
Very good, i see it, but its missing some things, make it more realistic
example: add a sun that brights and like few particles on the middle between cars,
About the font:-
its OK but you can improve it by making like the “4K studios” up for a bit…
and if you make the depth less is better…
My Rating:-
Well, i can say… the text is like 7.5/10
The city 6.5/10
the cars 10/10
and, Overall, i’d say it is 8/10…
Also, i really liked the image but its missing only some things if u fix them then i will change my mind about it and make it 10/10
and oh i forgot a thing
While the car in the left is blue and in the right is red
you can change the text depending on this
I mean you can make the "Left one = Blue (keep it)
“Right one = Red both"4K Studios” and the “Cars” text
I like it, but coming from somebody who ACTUALLY makes thumbnails all the time for their videos, I’d recommend some things for this.
It’s pretty good. the characters and the cars look fine, but I think you should add more brightness and saturation to the image to make it look WAY more vibrant, and it attracts more people into your game. Also, if you’d like, you could add a backdrop to the cars so they don’t look weird and out of place on the background.
The text looks way too bland. Use a different font or hire somebody to make you a logo for the game.
The formatting is okay, It’s not perfect but it could be worked on. I don’t think the “4k Studios” thing should be on the title, it’s a bit distracting, to say the least.
All in all, i personally would probably not play this game because of the thumbnail. It’s probably a really good concept! just the thumbnail has gotta be altered a bit.
The logo is clean, however adding effects to it such as gradient or a more attractive and brighter color would fit it much better.
The background and carts look rather plain, it could be fixed with a quality render of the objects and scenery through programs such as Blender or Cinema 4D
Judging from just the thumbnail, I wouldn’t want to play the game because it doesn’t show much action. Try making it look more lively as if the carts were colliding with bump effects and such.
I would pay 3000-4000 robux for that thumbnail. Really good effort you got into, i have actually no bad critics or something for you to improve there. I rate that 10/10
As I’ve said multiple times- the cars are NOT supposed to look realistic. I will consider changing that though, thanks!
It’s a little harder for me to use blender due to the fact that I usually use laptop (with a mousepad), although I plan to get a mouse sometime this week. I will look into doing that once I do get it, though.
Idk if it’s just me, but the way the cars are positioned is really weird. There just sort of there… If you know what I mean, there like floating. There’s no story behind why they are there, did they go up a ramp and are about to crash or what? I think it’s just sort of strange…
