Feedback on GFX(Remake)

So I had made post on the feedback of a game logo GFX and wanted some feedback.

And A lot of people had recommended to use HDRI to make it more good.

So I made it with HDRI
Here is the remade GFX


Any feedback appreciated :smiley:

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It looks pretty good, but the text is just terrible mess, it looks horribly, sorry if its sounds mean…
It does not fit to it.

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I love the changes you made to this!:smiley: The font is on spot I love all the detail you put into this!:smiley: Keep Up The Great Work!:smiley:

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Yeah I am also thinking to change it.
Thanks for the feedback :smiley:

It looks nice! Character lighting is a bit too much tho, washes out the characters.

Well, it looks alright not the best. I’m confused on what you’re trying to portray as in the round survival part. I’m assuming that the green thing is a obstacle but it is not that clear to tell what’s going in the background. Also, the guy with the black t-shirt is holding the sword in a weird way. I’m pretty sure that wasn’t intended and that it’s rotated the wrong way.

Main Points:
Fix up the text. The font is okay but the colors are not very suiting to the GFX itself.
Sword on the black t-shirt persons hand needs to be rotated correctly.
Add more in the background what the game is about and more detail of it.
Lightings a little too bright and reflects in a weird way.

Decent GFX could use some work though.

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Looks good, although the posing on the T shirt guy looks wrong with the arm