Feedback on Low-poly factory!

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#21

Thank you, this means a lot :slight_smile:

#22

Looks really nice! You should add some automated doors to make it even cooler.

#23

Thanks for the support, i’ll probably add some automated doors to it.
I’ll see how it’s gonna look like… :slight_smile:

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#24

The back of the factory looks empty, add some more detail to the back of it.
Other than that the front looks good.

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#25

Thanks for the feedback, i’m working on it :slight_smile:

#26

This “Low Poly Factory” is quite decent, i like how you added the stripes around the chimney. As that’s what makes it still if it’s a factory, however since it took you 3 hours to build i can say you are really doing a great job it just! Needs some details, equipment, decorations around the factory and the area itself. Overall there is a couple of things! I’ll add to your, so it could look. More decent, and even more improved a lot more overall. You have done a decent job on, your factory i would. Recommend you add some other colors/textures to the! Building itself or if your going for a grey factory you could keep the color at. This i would try adding some red, grey, yellow, light blue others. You could try adding one of those colors to your! Building instead of having it all grey. Overall i want to try keep this post nice and simple for you!

Low poly factory
Know i see you didn’t add any kind of equipment, details, decorations around the area and the factory itself. I would try adding some boxes, crates, barrier, trucks, gates, conveyors, forklift, ect. Those are just a couple of decorations you could try, adding around the factory including in the back of the building these are the details. You want to add since you will mostly see, these kind of things in the back or in the front of the building! There is a bunch of details you could possible add, since you didn’t add some those, are just some i would recommend you try making i know it will look more, better and improved with the final details. And as i said above you could try adding some colors to the building including, some textures try adding some yellow, light blue, red, grey, green ect. There is always different kind of colors you could. Try working on to see if one of these, would fit best on your factory! If they don’t i would just keep it grey because a lot of factory’s in real life, they always look grey with bricks added as texture, so try doing something like that just. Don’t go overboard with the details and colors just play around to see which color fits the best for you. Overall as you can see below i would definitely add different kind of buildings known as cooling tower, electricity tower, power station, water tower, ect. Those are the different kind of buildings that are always around the factory exterior area.

Conveyor Belts
Now i like the overall shape of your factory and if you, plan on adding details into the interior part i would recommend you add some conveyor belts, with the (promo, known as the legs) black, sliver, blue, ect. As that’s what mostly conveyor belts have and then you could try implementing some “Idler” underneath the belts they may be linked into a transmission via belts or contact with other moving parts. That helps pull items over to boxes, crates, trucks, containers, ect. Depending on what kind of factory your making warehouse, east factory, modern factory and others they will have conveyor belts with robot arms. Grabbing items and moving them over to the side! Down the belt. And then if you plan on adding those next you, could add the Head Pulley, Drive Pulley, that’s what makes your, conveyor belts moves to contract with other parts that’s on the. Conveyor belts i would suggest you do something, like that and you could always add some containers, boxes, crates, and other different details and equipment inside the factory however those are just some i would try! Implementing other details into the interior part if you plan on adding. Those try adding different kind of conveyor belts overall i believe. Your factory doesn’t implement this so don’t, worry about those details!!

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I know you only added the factory building, but it would look more better if you added details to your factory to look more better, as i said above you could add some containers, crates, bin, boxes, ect. Around the the exterior with conveyor belts inside the, factory so they could put boxes inside the truck into bins! And others I would also add a few other details to, your factory to make it stand out more. Here is couple of equipment you could add to your build! to make it look more decent overall you, have done a amazing job on your “Low Poly Factory” hope to see the improvements and updates you. Add to your Factory hope to see what else yo make, in the future and very soon i would like. To see what else you try making overall nice creation you have. Here keep working on it and i know it will look, a lot more better featuring other details!

Factory Equipment

  • Boxes, Containers, Blue Crates & Heavy Duty Rack Shelving
  • Electric Straddle Stacker, Ladders, Factory Safety Bollards
  • Metal Cans, Cranes, Wooden Barrels & Trucks, Bulk Storage Rack
  • Stacks Of Boxes, Cones, Power Lift Stacker & Hydraulic Stacker
  • Rack Protector, Dock Lights, Pallet Jack Truck, Electric Order Picker,
  • Factory Machines, Bins, Dock Light, Skyjack Sjiii 3226 Scissor Lift,

Overall, you have done a amazing job, on your “Low Poly Factory” it looks really good those are just a couple of details and equipment you. Could add for your factory and around the exterior area! Hope to see what else you plan on adding to your, factory as will as equipment you add next anyways the details i listed above! Is just what your factory needs try adding, those so it would look a lot more, decent however you don’t. Want to go overboard with the details i would try adding a couple of you, plan on going for a simple factory and not a, fully completed one overall it’s your opinion to! See if you want it fully completed overall great job on your build.

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#27

Your replies are always so impressing. The suggestions are super great, i’ve been working on a trash area that i would put behind the factory, and i was working on fences aswell.
Adding some boxes, containers, crates, stacks of boxes outside are gonna be for sure a great addition, i’ll make sure to add those as soon as possible.
However, i wanted to keep the factory a bit simplistic, so i didn’t add any cooling towers to it.
Anyways, thanks for your amazing feedback. Your suggestions are amazing as always.
I’ll add most of the exterior related suggestions for sure, even though i’m not planning to work on the inside at the moment.
Thanks once again for this wonderful feedback :slight_smile:

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#28

Trucks at the back would look cool

#29

How is the build going? Anything new? :smile:

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#30

Added a trash area in the back of the factory, some windows aswell, and working on adding new things. But it’s taking more time than how it’s supposed to be because of school. :confused:

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