Feedback on my 3rd edited gfx ever

This is my 3rd ever edited gfx I ever made. It feels a bit dark to me. Feedback?

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pretty nice just might want to sharpen the white lines a tiny bit. good job!

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Thanks for the feedback. I’ll sharpen the white lines next time, its just that it took me over 12 hours to find out what I was doing wrong.

Hey I know you! (I think) but it doesn’t matter xD.

The Gfx is really good for your 3rd ever edited one. Its a bit dark but if this is the theme its fine.
you should maybe add some effects like outterglow and the shadows are not Placed really well.

But Cheers for your 3rd ever gfx its really good!

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Ye I’m from here FeedBack On My New GFX

Anyways, the shadows are bad because I was using the cycles engine when I made this gfx. Currently I’m learning how to add effects. Thanks for the feedback!

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It’s cute! I suggest adding overlays and sharpening that lining (like someone else said). For your first GFX, it’s great! Also, I suggest adding more detail to the background to make it “pop” a bit more.

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Thanks for the feedback! Also this is my 2nd edited GFX or render, people call it different things. I edited a gfx before but I only added text to it.