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That Noob has so much reflectance on him you could literally use him as a Disco Ball to reflect back light
The Noob itself looks pretty good though! Although I’m wondering about the way he’s positioned 
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The noob is levitating (Godly Noob)
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an hour? agreed with @JackscarIitt its too reflective.
but an hour? That would be pretty simple to do, ngl. What were you doing? it should have tooken you more like 20 minutes.
Time aside, you need to have a better background, rendered preferably. and your posing doesn’t look good…
it doesn’t look like he’s levitating
for your first gfx, its actually pretty good. 625/1000 marks.
at first I didn’t know about pose mode n I was trying to pose it in object mode
Thanks for your feedback I will try to improve in my next GFX
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The position looks more like a “what up homie” pose. The noob has too much reflectance, it’s like a stainless steel noob.
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Cool, but the noob is reflecting too much. Also, i can’t consider this as a GFX. It’s just a render. You didn’t really edit anything.
I recommend you add a background. That will make it better, also. I saw that you said
We can’t really see that because of the camera positioning. Put the camera down a little bit and you are good to go.
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Ok, thanks for your feedback. I will change everything I can in 2nd one
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The reflectance can be debatable, it can look nice on some scenarios, while its looking overdone in another scenario. You might also need to work on your poses, I didn’t know he was levitating until I saw one of your replies. (Tbh, thought it was like a dance pose or something like that. 
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Other than that, I think this is not bad for a first GFX.
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looks like the main thing want to work on is posing, lighting and background
For a first gfx, not too bad I’ll assume you were playing around with blender.
Try adding a background or other scenery such as mountains, hills, a floor.
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Looks pretty solid. 9/10
There is a lot of reflection, so you may wanna tweak that.
Oh and also try to experiment with more lighting, a background, better posing and effects.
Dude, it looks really good for the first time! The material is cool, but try to use a bit roughness, also you can try to work on background, posing and composition. Goodluck!
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At least noob looks metallic, not specular like a lot of begginning gfxers do
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Nice for first GFX, but maybe fix the position and add background, details and fix lighting
no, it doesn’t really look metallic to me…
Looks good. Maybe instead of a noob, try using your own avatar.