Feedback on my first ui!

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#4

It’s not bad for a first! I think the one in the middle is great but the one on the right can be improved.

(For the left) The pointing hand doesn’t really look centered. Maybe it’s just me I don’t know. The one on the right has too much going on, the gradient is fine, but the color choice is :flushed:. Hot pink with a cyan color and cyan text. For a first though, these are great.

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#5

Ok Thank you for your feedback!!! :smiley:

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#6

Hey there, Flashbee!
Overall, these look really nice! I like the font you used and general color palette. If I had to give you some feedback, I’d suggest the following.

  • Maybe increase the thickness of the icon lines in the first icon (left to right). It would make it more visible and attractive. I’d also decrease the thickness of the black/brown border around it and make it all black, as it looks a bit bulky and inelegant. I’d also maybe try a small gradient in the background like you did with the “Play” button, or just try to get the colors to match a bit more.
  • The “Play” button looks very cool. The colors are perfect. I’d maybe suggest rounding the corners of the rectangle and possibly add a thin black border around it to better match the first icon.
  • Lastly, the “BUY” button. I’m all for the gradient in that one, maybe you could even apply it to all of the other buttons. The only thing is the text color. Since it matches the gradient color, it blends in and loses its vibrancy. Since this is a buy button (and you supposedly want people to click it,) you should consider replacing the color with something more bold that pops out.

That’s all I’ve thought of, but very great work for your first UI! Keep going!
DaBestIvo

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#7

Thank you!!! :smiley: I will continue using these tips and will create more. :slight_smile:

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#8

It’s look okay, but the one at the top right has an unusual color combination. I would recommend having another combination of colors.

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#9

I’m sorry, but there is to much watermarks for me to be able to feedback on it.

I understand that you do not want your work to be stolen, but this is a bit to much.

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#10

ok will put less

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#11

New Project (7)
New Project (7)1280×720 86.4 KB

Has less now but still has watermark.

#12

Ah I can see it clearly now.

Looks good! I like the play button very much!
Maybe the color choice for the tap button is not to good, tap buttons are 9,5/10 times dark themed.
Buy button also looks good, maybe different text color is recommended.

This is completely off-topic, why are you on a alt (Making that up through your name)

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#13

Lol this is not my alt this is my main now due to roblox locking my other account.

#14

Yikes that’s bad, let’s get back to topic.

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#15

Its looks cool, but its really hard to see with all the water marks. I get your trying to protect your work, but next time just use 2-3 watermarks.

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#16

Yep ok sorry! :smiley:

30char30char

#17

OK thank you! for your feedback

#18

Oh wow I’m getting real off topic now, but why are you adding 30char sometimes?

#19

Because you need 30 letters in order to post. So I write small things but need to add that.

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#20

(I understand you put your name over all the ui so it doesn’t get stolen, but could you atleast put it under your ui so we can see your work.)

Middle is pretty basic, but I really like the top left UI. For the top right, I don’t like the bright bright cyan text.

You should keep practising, you’ll become a really good UI designer someday!

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#21

ok Thankyou for the Feedback!!! :smiley:

#22

also my new post on Ro-Search!!! Ro-search concept ui (Google but roblox version)

#23

Updated the watermark and made it less.