Hello, I’m looking for some people to test out my game called “High School Cafeteria Simulator” where you are able to throw food at people and also interact/socialize with people in an interactive environment. Moving forward, before I launch this game, I am looking for feedback and what to work on for the game to become good.
This is the link where you can beta test:
Nice idea and it works as intended, I do have a few suggestions to make the game more appaealing however:
Additionally, the map was quite empty there’s very little going on. You may benefit from adding more tables and chairs and other thing typically seen in dining rooms (it helps a lot to take inspo from google). Also, I think you should add more random decor and textures to the map as little detail will make it look so much better. Despite this, I do appreciate the size of the map, the pillars and some of the decor.
*Also, just an opinion but I think you should push the worker station back quite a lot, it takes up an uneccesary amount of space. Potentially consider adding windows too.
local frame =
script.Parent.MouseButton1Click:Connect(function()
frave.Visible = not frame.Visible
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Also, here’s some extra features which could be added but aren’t necessary:
Gear, which can be paid for with either time, a curreny or robux.
Emotes (which could also be paid for), if you’re worried about animating them freemodels should be good enough for this.
Maybe more options for the donate thing. You could add a little leaderboard if you like and a piggy bank to trigger the ui maybe.
Maybe consider adding a little server time thing somewhere. This screen could have version on it too.
Also very unecessary but quests? At least maybe an incentive for having a friend join the game.
(You already said you were adding this but I’ll quickly list this anyways, but a ‘secret’ maybe. I think you should utilise the vents as you were considering.)
Hopefully, some of this advice has helped, sorry for the yap😭.
Also the snacks are ocassionaly buggy, especially the bigger snack and the epic snack😅
Lol will do, any plugins or suggestions that could fix the lighting?
Ah lol, I might fix them, those vending machines are free models anyway
TBH, i’ve barely really touched on lighting before but as for what it should look like, I think the place should look decently bright with even lighting. This can be done by just placing an invisble part with a light in it (I hope) or just distributing the light bubls easily. Also, white is probably fine now that i think about it.
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I like this improvement, it also makes the bin stand out more
A bug? Lol, that’s odd. I’ll fix it on my end
Also, what type of things I should add on the walls or just in general as a decor?
more posters
a noticeboard section: this could focus on the server stats and version and include some ads and the notice board thing you already have
maybe a fire alarm and this fire alarm box thing next to it. it could set of sprinklers and have a cooldown. (i’d recommed placing this near the main door)
random indents in the cieling and a wall or too to make the layout more interesting, if that makes sense
cieling:
random thought but maybe add a small lavatory as well
maybe a glass wall to make thing interesting
you could have your walls like this:
you can literally add anything thats related, again i recommended searching online for inspiration - it helps a lot
Yeah, add general decor too if i didnt mention this
Will do, I might recolour the lunch tables
ah shucks, I gotta restart from scratch with this update that I am working on, my roblox studios crashed
you can check ur autosaved to save time
One more thing change oriemtation setting:
StarterGui>ScreenOrientiation>LandscapeSensor
Also, can I see what a noticeboard typically looks like?
If you click on the StartGui service, then look at properties (not adding another instance)
