I’m new to music making, and I tried to fiddle around with the notes, and I tried to get a gloomy tone, but not ear-piecing song.
I would like your feedback, as this is only my first try.
Thank you! 
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Since I’m no genius in music I wouldn’t be able to give some detailed feedback, but I like it. It’s a nice gloomy song and for a first try I think you’ve done well. 
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Aw, thanks. That means a lot.
I would try to make the notes blend in a little more.
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Alright, thank you very much.
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No offense, but it sounds like random notes are being played. I’d try adding more parts to the music if you know what I mean. You can see @VegetationBush’s tutorial to make it better.
I’d say you should change the notes and add more parts to the music as I’ve already said.
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I was about to say this-- I think it’s good, it has a nice tone but I’m not sure what type of game it would fit into or anything like that. Stick to the same pitch, hope this helped
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