Feedback on my Obby Game!

EDIT: Game is private for testing reasons, sorry if you can’t feedback about it, later on, I will create a new post about this game but will be the revamped version of the game. (I actually deleted the whole map and made it 10x times better)

Hi guys, I recently created a obby game and now published it, I just wanted to get feedback about it. (Game Icon, Thumbnails, Game UI, etc)

The game currently has 50 stages, but more are coming soon.
Also, has a rebirth system!

Things coming soon (Don’t feedback about them)
Stage progression percentage
Mobile ShiftLock (Coming tomorrow, forgot about it)

Game link: Escape Black Manta Obby! - Roblox

I think im gonna revamp the entire obby, (except the acid part), to make it more appealing to it’s title and not just be a “very easy obby”, thanks for your feedback

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Game Icon - 3/10
Not appealing

Thumbnails - 4/10
???

Gameplay - 0/10
Just an obby with nothing new + it isnt fun

UI - 6/10
Isn’t great but is understandable

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My stages didnt update until I died, resetting my progress.
The menu UI is also way too big, I’d recommend making it a bit smaller and finding out why the stages weren’t changing.

Wow, they worked for me, I’ll try to fix it

Thanks for your feedback, appreciate it, gonna try to make the game icon better

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After completing all 50 stages, I entered the white ending area and got teleported in between the brown brick and the blue brick in the winners area (underneath your 51tst checkpoint)

Thanks for telling, however I’m revamping the game and deleted all stages except for acid stages, so I don’t know if that bug gonna be fixed. (Deleted them in studio, in-game they are still there)

I’d clean up the ui, music, and sky box.
If you want I’m pretty good at Ui and have a number of good songs that i think would fit your game, i’d be willing to help you for free if you want.

The game icon is okay I guess, and the gameplay is kind of dry and there’s nothing really happening around you it’s just a basic obby, however the UI looks pretty good, but overall keep up the work man!

thanks you, im currently working on revamping the game to make the gameplay a little more unique

gonna try improving the ui and music, also, thanks for the offer, but i currently gonna work solo for more experience