Hi y’all. I’m pretty new at building obbys, so, apologies if it’s terrible, lol.
I would love some feedback!
You can play my game here: Pink Obby! - Roblox
Thank you, have a great Saturday! 
I’m sorry if this comes off as mean, but I can tell that there was not too much effort put into this Obby.
You have not play tested your game, because the second teleporter teleports you’e back to spawn. If you had taken the time to complete your Obby, you would have seen this.
There is also no checkpoints, meaning that if you die, then you go back to Stage 1.
Aside from that, good starter game, but next time instead of adding admin to your game, focus on refining your game and polishing it.
I will be 100% honest because that is how I am. Do not take it personally, use it as feedback.
Your game is general is poorly made, straight up facts. Checkpoints do not work, stages are too easy and the game generally looks bad. These things must be addressed before publishing a game - this is my opinion. Also I got a quick question, how long have you been developing for? Do you even know how to code or build?
If not then you need to learn because these are core fundamentals in making a game.
To improve, you need to make the stages more harder. If the stages are easy, it makes players bored so that is an issue which needs to be addressed.
Like @System502 said that is also a problem because if players die, they go back to the beginning. They loose all of that progress, unless that is intentional to make the game hard.
Looks good for a start but just three things.
- Why is the skybox so pink, it really gives me Barbie doll vibes for some raeson, but its still fine
- I want to see it having a checkpoint system, that defines it an obby
- Why the heck am I like this?
Is my face cursed or something, or is it supposed to be like this the whole time?