Feedback on my second GFX, and pricing

Thx, do you liked it ???

For starters the lighting is very bland, the ice cream isn’t in her hand
(If it’s suppose to be in a hand), and her arm in the background is poorly rigged.

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Looks visually appealing!

I would advise adding a question mark after “Job” and then changing “HIRING” to “NOW HIRING!”

Other than that, maybe change it so the hand is holding the ice cream more?

Happy Holidays! :snowflake:

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500-1k, I would recommend removing the rectangle box and just having text.

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Can you make it for me please? :slight_smile:

Um, what do you mean? I am very confused.

How will you make it???

I like it. Lighting is a bit strange in my opinion, but aside from that, looks really good.

I am not understanding what you are asking for. Are you wondering how to do the things I suggested?

(Sorry the Original File is a tiff and the Dev Forum doesn’t allow that so I had to take a screenshot of the file)

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Ok, It is nice just better the lighting,also how did you rendered all that?

Thanks, I rendered it with Eevee and baked the lighting.

Eeeve what is eeeve???

A rendering engine that comes with Blender 2.8

Can you teach me, lol i thought that eeeve was from pokemon

Here is a Blender Guru Series about rendering with Eevee (You need beginner knowledge to Blender for you to understand)

This is off-topic. Please move your conversation to “messages” or something to make less-clutter. Thanks.

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It looks quite fuzzy and pixelated for the text and the overlay elements. Did you increase the size of the image after making it or something?

Make sure you export to the resolution you plan to use for the final advert to avoid that. It’s bearable for the thick text, but the thin text gets distorted to the point where I wouldn’t want to pay for this.

The 3D rendering part looks really nice except for the randomly placed ice cream. I’d probably put it in somebody’s hand otherwise it seems a bit too random of an addition.

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As others have mentioned, you’d probably be successful pricing GFX like this in the low-to-mid hundreds of Robux.

In terms of feedback, I’d recommend adding a question mark to the “Looking for a job”. I’d also recommend adding what the group/game’s name; the ice cream doesn’t make it that obvious.

Regardless, great work! If you’re looking for more/better feedback, @BanTech covered everything I didn’t.

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Around 150. Lighting isn’t great and it’s hard to know what I’m supposed to look at.

1/10
Work on positioning such as text/etc