Feedback on my Shop 2

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#1

Hey Everyone.

I listened to your Feedback and this is how my Shop looks now.

Before

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After
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Here are some more pics

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Please tell me if there‘s still something to improve !

This Shop was inspired by the Deathrun Shops

Thanks for helping :+1:t3:

Edit:
Alright i made 2 changes on my Shop:

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Now it‘s looking even better. Thanks :+1:t3:

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#2

Amazing, love how the shop is coming together! :hidere:
I would recommend…

  • Creating unique features you believe would look great so it doesn’t give the appearance of plagiarism/copying.
  • Adding more lights to brighten up the shops themselves.
  • Improving the scenery aesthetic, consisting of small trees, plants, etc.
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#3

In my opinion, the before looks better than the after.

#4

Could you tell me why. What is the problem with the 2nd one ?

#5

Nice to see that you like it :slight_smile: i’m gonna make a note of your recommendations. Thank you for your help :+1:t3:

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#6

As @zuffhy stated above, those recommendations would definitely improve the overall looking of this shop…

But i wanted to point out something concerning the materials you’ve used… I was thinking maybe if you try to go for a low poly style, it would fit even better since the realistic looking isn’t really well done as of now, even though you’ve done a good job on this.

Try changing the material to smooth plastic for all the elements and see how it turns out to be.

Keep up the great work ! :slight_smile:

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#7

Thank you. I‘ll make a note of this and try it out someday but i personally like the materials i used. Also thanks for the kind words, it motivates me to make other things :smile::+1:t3:

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#8

Looks great, keep up the great work!

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#10

The second one looks so small, the first one looks nice and professional!

#11

Really nice resemblance, could however make it more unique rather then virtually copying. When taking insparation, consider the same design, but maybe a different layout. :slight_smile:

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#12

There is a vast improvement in quality between the before and after shops. The second one has structure and better proportions. The one thing that seems out of place is the light, it seems weird because it is a pill shape. Also try making the stack of coins a little less perfect. Other than that, I think you have made huge improvements.

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#13

I‘ve built the 2nd one with the feedback of my first topic

But it‘s ok i can‘t change your mind, that‘s your opinion :slight_smile:

#14

Your shop looks really good but I think you should try making the cylinders different sizes, right now it looks to repetitive imo.
I would also try to change the wood colors, for example. make the shelves a slightly darker brown.
The lamp is ok, but you could improve it a lot:

  • Scale the lamp (without the rope) down. Right now it’s way too big.
  • Select the yellow neon part (the bulb) and make it thinner. This small change could make your shop look more detailed.
  • Lastly, you could have 3 of these bulbs from left to right (make sure they have the same space in between). If you want to do this you must have done the first step though.

As others have already mentioned, a nice environment would make your shop look way better.

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#15

Loving the changes you’ve made to the Shop, especially when it comes to using some good ol’ nostalgic items as well as the use of materials here.

In addition to the fabulous ideas above, I’d suggest introducing some textures to some areas of the Shop, maybe the back could have some sort of pattern to give in that woah cool! look or something if you were feeling like it.

Also try switching the material of this image to something like diamond plate or slate or something? Up to you!

Good luck, looking forward to seeing further updates etc!

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