FeedBack on my Vibe Game Build

So recently I’ve been inspired to work on my building skills, so i decided to build a “vibe game” i could use some feedback on exterior and interior, thank you

and here’s the link to the game if you want a closer look Project Vibe - Roblox

Thank you in advance!

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Very nice, one thing though is that while you have detail your walls are bland and there is a certain almost low poly style to the building in general which I don’t think is the style you are going for.

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Ye, if you’re talking about the backround buildings, i didn’t know if should keep them simple, or add more detail, thank you for the feedback though! I will take it into consideration.

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Posting the reply here just in case you forgot:

  1. Tone down the lighting for the gravity room. I barely can see anything inside there
  2. Add more details like posters or wall cracks, trash on floor
  3. The animations are already really good, and i like you put in a small easter egg in it.
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I mean the entire build, not just the background buildings.

I like it! But I feel the exterior walls are bland and lack material. Try also putting more detail into the windows because they just look like plain neon rectangles. Maybe make the place a little more dirty. Otherwise, nice build!

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Looks really good imo! Maybe spice up the interior a bit!

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Looks super great! The interior has little inside so maybe add some more. Great work in general!

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If you are going for a Japanese style, you could put the ‘main space’ at the 2nd floor and have a small lobby at the area where the ‘main space’ currently is. Many buildings in Japan are like that, so if you’re going for a modern-Japanese style, you should try the suggestion I just gave you.

it looks really cool. i like the aesthetic. maybe change the furniture up. it would look cool if you added a car like the ones in Arsenal or
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Hello! I think this should be in #help-and-feedback:cool-creations [Just saying before any mod comes over here]

I thinks it looks incredible amazing! I like the Tokyo style (I think that’s what you tried to achieve), but here are some points I will improve:

  • I fell some kind of emptiness. Maybe you should add a lot more neon things or expand it a bit.

  • I can’t difference between the street’s floor and the sidewalk, you could make it a little thicker

  • It’s really awesome, maybe you could downgrade it a bit so it looks a bit less impressive JK. DON’T STOP, PLEASE CONTINUE MAKING THIS KIND OF GREAT BUILDINGS!

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I’d tone down the lighting a bit but overall it looks really good :+1:

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Yes I totally agree, this is still half complete but I wanted some feedback on what i could improve before I finish so I totally agree with the emptiness. Also I’ll work on make the sidewalk and street better, thank you for the kind words and feedback :smile:

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I have no idea how you think he is building low poly. Please make sure you know what low poly actually is

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I like it.

Try changing up the materials you use, though. Smooth plastic looks a bit out of place especially since you’re setting this build in a rainy setting.

Good job.

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Great buildings, but I think these Japanese texts are wrong.
The shop text in second picture, it looks like mirrored, so you have to rotate 180 degrees on Y axis.
in 4th picture, the last character is a little wrong.What did you mean about it?

At first glance it looks really good but the walls at the upper parts that have windows are simple and don’t have much detail which isn’t a bad thing but more detail is better overall. The lower parts of the buildings are quite nice.
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