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I like that ALOT better the text-shadow really helps! keep playing around with it, but I think you are on the right track!
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Wayyyyy too arched. Also try using different fonts
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Looks good! However, I have one nitpicky grammar mistake. I would change it to “Noobling’s Extraordinary Adventure” rather than “Nooblings Extraordinary Adventure”. If this was on purpose or you like it this way, by all means, don’t change it.
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Maybe there are multiple Nooblings and it’s Nooblings’ Extraordinary Adventure?
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Yeah, the arch and all caps makes it a bit hard to read. Now pretend you’re 6 years old…you may not even know what extraordinary is, let alone how to read that word.
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Maybe! (although I only saw one noobling in the picture.
I like the concept, but here are a few improvements I’ve visually done (you don’t need to take all into account) that would make it look cleaner/ pop out more! The edit isn’t perfect as I just used what you provided, but it gives a good idea of what ideas I had.
The quality isn’t super great, especially on the warping of the text, but I think this would work more.
My ideas where to compact any wasted space between the text, warp the “extraordinary” and “nooblings” lines to be slightly less curved, then make the “adventure” line taller and more prominent, to show variation and fill space when put into a square format. I then added a black outline, and shadowing to the text, to make it stand out more against backgrounds, and added a noob character holding onto the logo, to add some uniqueness. I also added some highlights to the text.
You could take in some of these ideas, execute them as you please, and they would definitely help!
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Wait dude!
You really made this!
Can I use it also This is amazing!
Edit: said you really make this my grammar suck…
If you do want to use it, I’m fine with that (I have no use for it, afterall it is a logo based on your game haha!)
Good luck with the game btw dude.
Transparent version of the logo ^
Alr dude, wait I feel guilty, Man I just have to pay you no acceptation.
Lol 450 Robux a least.
Keep the robux dude, and use them to perhaps comission something else for the game, who knows! If you do feel guilty, just credit me in the description, I’m more then fine with that.
Alr, Can I ask what application did you use to make this?
I used Fire Alpaca for the transformations to the text (but only because I havent re-installed all of my paint.net plugins) but if you were to use paint.net, which I used for the rest of the logo editing, I’d reccomend getting this plugin for transformations of text Grid Warp - Plugins - Publishing ONLY! - paint.net Forum and this pack of plugins for stuff like alignment, and drop shadows http://users.telenet.be/krisvandermotten/Downloads/Vandermotten.PaintDotNetEffects.zip
Cool, I use paint. net too, I’ll just get these plugins in.
I’ve done some stuff:
Any Improvements?
Extreme overuse of effects. Also the yellow looks like barf
Alr lemme change some stuff…
Also does the noob look a bit wierd.
Yeah a little, if I would change it it would have some shading and idk. The hat is super low quality
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Fixed kinda hat thing:
