Feedback on this obby (UPDATE 7)

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UI definitely needs some HEAVY work.

Here is an image of what it looks like on my monitor (4k, 32in).

Besides that, the obby itself is fine. Iā€™d recommend adding confetti, tweens, and a guide arrow for the stages but overall it is pretty basic. The ultimate goal for simple games, like obbys, is to have something that is satisfying to play and satisfies the low attention span of younger children. This obby does not accomplish that. But it is a good start.

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Jeez i gotta fix that, what I gotta to for the Obby to accomplish the goals? Iā€™ll be updating on this topic btw

How do I scale this up for all screens?

For the size of the UI - do you use offset or scale? The UDim2 type, for example, has this layout: {x scale, x offset}, {y scale, y offset}

Use scale to ā€œscaleā€ the UI correctly to all screens. Iā€™d also make the Ui Stroke much thinner. You can always use the ā€œDeviceā€ option (under the ā€œTestā€ tab in studio) to change the device you are viewing on. I love to view it as the physical size of the iPhone - X and an HD 1080 PC, to make sure I am getting all the scales correct.

Well I use auto scale gui plugin and for scrolling frames I used the ui list layout

Okay, Ive figured it out I didnā€™t turn on text scales

I have fixed the UI and the text too

Iā€™ve fixed and shortend some of the stages and added new ones

Right off the bat I have a few comments I have to say.

  1. The UI covers almost half your screen, I recommend to add a hide UI button.

  2. This is just personal preference but It would add a level of progression if you were to add a sound or animation after you reach a checkpoint just so people get that small entertainment to keep them going.

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Got it! Thx for the feedback will add those things

Ive made changes and improvements to this obby

The overall look of the game is fine but i would recommend adding a skybox, also getting to a checkpoint feels a little underwhelming so maybe add a little VFX. A confetti particle will look good, as long as it flys out at a decent speed to give that explosion effect (dont make it fly out too fast though).
Is see you have updated the UI so im gonna leave an updated image of the new UI.

(Sorry about the mobile buttons, im not at my computer right now.)

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Ok thanks for the feedback I was making small changes into this game so Iā€™ll add vfx for the check points and I already fixed the hide ui button

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Hey Robean I added confetti try it out

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Nice, I like it.

I saw you added a obby shop and a skip stage button, Really nice update.

Thx but Iā€™ve been added that, hide button was in the way while I was updating and I didnā€™t notice

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Should I change the thumbnail?

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The current thumbnail is ok, but it doesent show much of the obby. If you were to change the thumbnail (I think you should) you should show the obby with more saturation, to add more saturation you can use free software like Photopea to edit the picture. I dont think you need to put the game name in the thumbnail because it might take up too much space.

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Hi Robean, I changed the thumbnails and the pictures