Intro
Hello fellow developers! I’ve just finished working on my first third person weapons, please give me some feedback! I accept any criticism 
The guns are star wars rebel alliance ones.
Game
Edit: The models are not mine, I just scripted them.
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Your game is closed. So I can’t give any feedback.
“The permission levels at this location prevent you from entering.”
Oh my bad, forgot to make it public.
Your guns are fantastic for your first go in my opinion
On the DLT-19X you probably should add a scope.
Congratulations for your first go!
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The models weren’t made by me I just scripted them, but thank you very much for the feedback!
So, wow, I really liked them. Good job.
Off-Topic
Except that the RPS-6 threw me into space, everything is fine. xD
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Lol I’m not going to say it was intentional 
First you should make it so that you don’t reload instantly
second all guns feel the same, i would probably add recoil or just something a little special about each gun, being able to hold click to shoot, having a scope or even shooting multiple bullets at once
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Not bad for a first, but you have a lot to improve on, maybe add a camera shake when you shoot, particles when it hits a part, particles when it shoots, better animations etc…
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Thank you so much for the feedback! Honestly I also feel like they’re not really different from each other so I’ll work on that.
Will do thanks alot for the feeback, I’ll add more things to them!
Just for inspiration purposes Not saying that they’re good, you can take my own blaster as an example.
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Everything looks good. Two things I recommend is,
- Add recoil animations,
- Make it so you mouse lock when you equip the gun.
Other than that you did a fantastic job!
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The models are really good, so good job if you made them.
Talking about the scripts, the bullet trajectory isn’t really smooth I think you made it with BodyForce or something right?, try to improve it; You can also improve some animations, and how you play them.
That’s a lot for your first try, so you did a really good job after all.
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Hiya @NickReddington!
Your weapons looks awesome (Star Wars fan too) maybe make the guns smaller and lower + add a bit more graphics. Else looks good keep up the work!
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Wow! These guns look really good, but you might want to anchor them.
I also think one of the guns got that visual glitch going on.
okay rly nice but a n i m a t e pls
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I don’t know whether you know about models and CFrames but
I recommend you to tie the gun to a fixed position relative to your screen.
Atleast you should work towards it.
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Ah it’s nice to meet other danish people in this community!
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