Hi there! We are “Car studios”, a small upcoming game development team. We’re looking for people who are willing to join our team and work with us on our new game, Ultimate Racing!
No offense but I see a lot of things here that aren’t right.
I think you have to make that clear by saying in percentages and showing what percentages people will get.
That’ll be hard it’d be better if you had another form of contact like Discord, it’ll fill up so much on Dev Forum, also after you get a team, I’m guessing you are going to be chatting by Roblox but Roblox filters many things and it’ll be hard.
You should more info about the game. And also
You should make a paragraph About Job and explain what people will be doing although this maybe enough. I think you might get more people if you fixed these problems.