Nope, there is nothing wrong with the code by itself. In fact this piece of code is commonly seen used with the collection service:
Basic collection services kill brick code from the tutorial
local CollectionService = game:GetService("CollectionService")
--// First, we will loop trough all the parts with the "killers" tag using a for loop.
for _, part in pairs(CollectionService:GetTagged("killers")) do
--[[
Now that we've got our killer parts, we're gonna bind them to a function,
so when they get touched, they will fire that function.
--]]
part.Touched:Connect(function(hit)
--// Classic killing brick script, nothing very interesting
if (hit.Parent:FindFirstChild("Humanoid")) then
local humanoid = hit.Parent.Humanoid
humanoid.Health = humanoid.Health - humanoid.MaxHealth
end
end)
end
You should notice it’s the exact same as your code sample posted but using collection service to get the parts instead of :GetChildren().
The only possible problem the piece of code can cause is when there are a large amount of parts to connect like thousands or millions since events take up memory commonly seen in tycoon games. As long as that doesn’t happen it should be fine… if it does then that’s a different scripting support question to manage large amount of touched instances.