Trees are very high quality, love the details on it. Nonetheless, it’s amazing.
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I like the fences, really. They are more unique. I haven’t seen a fence on ROBLOX that looks like that, all of them are classic or basic. Those are cool, nice one!
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I agree! The chain really adds to the build.
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- Change the lighting, don’t use the default baseplate lighting. That’s a huge pet peeve of mine when I make a map with no good lighting.
- Use different type of trees instead of using the same ones, the trees are good but make a different variety of trees.
- Try using more realistic textures. I suggest using the Professional Texture pack model on ROBLOX. Link: (Professional Texture Pack - Roblox)
- I THINK you used some unions in the map, try replacing those with meshes/meshparts.
- In the first screenshot, I see you made a model reflectable. I think you shouldn’t use it because it kinda looks weird. If you are going for a statue model then you don’t need to change it. If it’s accessible/useable, then yes.
Overall, amazing build. I like it a ton, keep the amazing work and keep pushing forward! Also, thanks for following me. 
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Thank you for the feedback! Bad or good I need it and need to learn some way. Thank you again
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You’re welcome, I love to help anytime! Feel free to visit my profile and leave me a message on the Developer Forums if you need any other assistance on building. I’ll be glad to help.
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Of course, will do. Just get me a list of what you can do I can I will consider having you help (Do you work for free?)
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Matters on what the work is. If it’s something simple like how to renovate builds in a minute or two then that could be free. If it’s building something for you (if it’s small yes it will, like a very small build) but if it’s a bit big then it would cost.
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I’ll consider it! Thanks for telling me all of this
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- Trees look freemodeled, try making your own.
- Is the fireman helmet made by you?
- The chains on the poles look awkward, can you provide a better picture?
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Trees were made by a friend that was on the project temporarly and I edited them to fit the styled map. Fire helmet was made by me and a freidn for a FD Roleplay game but we decided it would be fine to use it in the map
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the sign reads: “You are never forgotten for the sacrifices you made.”
however that is a switch from past tense to present tense.
it should read: “You are never forgotten for the sacrifices you make.”
not to nag or anything, but if you’re trying to improve it, that’s just a little thing to make it read better. I would also suggest centering the text/making it smaller so the message reads more uniform.
Will do. Any suggestions, bad or good feedback I appreciate.
Keep in mind I used in studio screenshot, so its not the highest quality