Heyo! I wanted some GFX practice and I decided to make some fan art for Bee Swarm Simulator. I would love some feedback on what could be improved. I will take the comments and consider them for future GFX! Thanks for coming by.
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That would be the werewolf in the cactus field, I believe. That positioning is good, though.
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Oh, haven’t got that far, lmao.
It all looks pretty good for me except for the Royal blue neon fly catcher. It looks oddly out of place
I feel it should have a slight cartoony shading or some hint of shadow.
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im not a profissional,but,i think that you should improve the cave rocks,because they dont fite with the graphic of the rest,i dont know if u wanted to be it looks like in-game,but i think that this is the only thing that i think that should improve.
anyway,you did a great job!
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I completely agree! The rock models exported from the game was really weird to work with so I left it with its default texture. I will definitely try and get some new rock textures next time.
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Looks really awesome, my opinion you should add one of those honey store. Packbacks but the Gfx looks great keep on practicing.!
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Looks great! I got a suggestion tho. Maybe add in a bag of honey in your left hand?
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Oh! I totally forgot about those. Thanks for noticing. I’ll pay more attention on things like that when making future gfx.
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You should change those rocks textures they aren’t really cool to see and I think the girl at the left should be more at the center. Btw I really like this gfx I think your really good!
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Thank you so much! I hope so. aha
this great, the lighting and the poses I hope to buy my pc fast to make good gfx
I really like this GFX, but the rocks texture looks a bit blurry if you could fix that then it’s perfect.
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I would say it looks a bit too blurry but other then that I love the render