Very cool creation! I like your work!
As for feedback, here are a few points you can improve:
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Lighting → Remove the light rays—they suggest an underground setting, but there’s no context. Where does the light come from? What are they doing? Where are they going? These are key questions to making a GFX. Also, I would increase the laser’s glow since it’s not as noticeable as the goggles.
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Scene → Consider adding more elements to the scene. It could either be SAS-inspired or completely fictional! Fog could help, and the legs need better visibility.
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Posing → The posing seems a bit stiff to me. Slightly bend the left character’s knees for a more natural stance.
You’re doing great for a beginner! I noticed that many beginners struggle with lighting, which is something you might want to work on. Keep practicing! 