Thoughts on my first official Thumbnail (One example) - Aki

I gave it a Drop Shadow now!

Changed!

I’m actually working on more trees so if I finish them, I’ll try adding them.

Changed aswell, I hope it’s more vibrant and nicer.

Already done!

Fixed!

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that doesn’t look like different font
i would suggest using something like the ‘kayak’ font

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I have seen the font and the problem is, It doesn’t look like the font I wanted it to be. I do want like a bulky, bold font! Like GothamBold in Studio!

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Nice! Looks a lot better. The background is better but tbh, it doesn’t fit the theme.

Maybe you can add some different colored types of trees.

The borderline of the thumbnail is completely gone now lmao.

Maybe make the Text font more cartoony?

If you want, you can add some overlays, don’t know how it’ll go with a cartoony theme though but you can experiment with it.

But overall it looks better than last time in my opinion. I give you a :+1: :slight_smile:

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I tried to give it a greener tint. It looked like some mint chewing gum then, don’t ask why. :rofl:

Working on that!

There was never ment to be a border for the thing. I just accidently rushed the screenshot. (I use PicMonkey and I cannot afford to buy it so…)

I’ll try that!

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I tried to give it a greener tint and cartoonish like text.

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like gothamblack :wink: that is the best font
edit: dont change it from this new font up above ^^ i like it

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Awesome Thumbnail. Text is neat but can be better.
The text is rather wide and not really matching the theme. We have this purplish shade in the background and these neat low poly trees with dark woodland forest theme.
Then we have this text thats white and grassy green thats different from the low poly trees color. The Outline of the text can be purplish to match the background or brown.

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I have updated the thumbnail and added a new tree, new small editions. Please let me know if it’s better or not. :smiley:

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In my opinion, it looks a little bit generic. Also, the darkest tree has a weird trunk color. Try changing that color and making the leaves color a little bit brighter, then the trees part would be decent.

Also, the font looks generic aswell, it looks like some of those online image editor websites’ fonts. I dont like the “italic” it has and the curves of the letters, but that’s all in my opinion, so…

Lastly, there’s a little “in-between outline” between the white outlines and the trees themselves. It looks a little bit weird. Also, try getting a higher resolution pic of the trees, they look blurry in the thumbnail, as if they were roblox screenshots or those crappy Windows’ 3D Model Viewer renders which look a little bit bad tbh.

So in general:

  • Get higher quality renders.
  • Change the font (this one is at your choice, it only looks bad in my opinion).
  • As @DuckyTheClown1st said, the text can be better, try fixing it, and as @IceTheOneAndOnly said, try using a different more-matching font, although the “matching” fonts all depend on your community. Ask your community, maybe.

Have a great day!
@WorkPro2007

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is that trunk of dark green tree also green?

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I like it overall! You may want to change the font up a little, but I already saw someone posted that.

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