Window Looks Odd

[Callum_Cloth (not)]

I made a window in roblox,

But it looks odd to me.

Any feedback to make it look better?

[Crazedbrick1]

1. The wood grain is facing the wrong way on the vertical parts.

2. It looks the frame is flush with the wall, which is a bit odd.

[Callum_Cloth (not)]

Okay, I fixed the grain and added adjustments. Which one do you think is better?

or

[Crazedbrick1]

I’d so for number two for now.

1. This is what I mean by using proper wood grain.

2. The frame seems a bit busy. Try pushing out the vertical planks out more and making the horizontal center plank thinner.

[Callum_Cloth (not)]

Okay I understand the grain now,

Is this better?

[Crazedbrick1]

Almost there. Now just fix the wood grain on the vertical inner frame parts.

[DasKairo (Cairo)]

maybe try making the glass part material into glass, a bit darker with reflectance, maybe make the frames slightly more brown?

Edit:
accidentally hit the reply and someone.

[Callum_Cloth (not)]

Okay, it this better?

[Callum_Cloth (not)]

It made it look a bit better, thank you

[DasKairo (Cairo)]

You can also add a Image or SurfaceGui of a White Canvas, Change the ImageColor to black then, make it transparent to add a tint at can only be seen on the outside

For SurfaceGui:
Size: {1,0}, {1,0}
Transparency: 0.4 - 0.95
Colour: (0,0,0)

Images:

[Callum_Cloth (not)]

I added transparent a decal of white and got a good result, thanks!


(bottom is none)

[hatespine (Nefris)]

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