So I wanted to make a gfx before my discord nitro runs out…
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Honestly this GFX is good.
And you did it in one hour that makes it even better in my opinion.
keep it up mate.
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Looks Amazing. The simplicity of the camera shot combined with the blur of the explosion makes it both action-y and subtle at the same time.
Also the lighting on the character is professionally soft and fitting to the theme. Well done. This is really good for 1 hour’s work!
EDIT: Oof, sorry your nitro is running out.
This is horrible, even for something that was made in an hour.
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First of all the colors are just random. Green grass, pink hair and an orange mushroom cloud?? There sre litteraly no connectuond here. I would recommend making, or finding, a colorpalette as the very first thing you do, when you want to make a GFX, and sticking to those colors throughout the entirity of the GFX.
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And then there are the lines… and oh boy have you not even considered the lines. Your GFX barely has any resting spot for the eyes, as the lines are sticking out in all directions. Diagonally, vertically and horizontally! It is a mess. And im sure it would have been fine, if that cloud hand been there in the background, but it does create quite an unbalance in your image. I would have liked to show this to you, but I am sadly writing this from my phone right now. I am however sure, that you will be able to see what I am talking about, if you know at least a little bit about GFX making.
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I also don’t really understand the context of this GFX. A robloxian citizen is esting a burger, while a nuclear apocalypse is commencing?
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@LunalaGX130 Also the lighting is NOT professionally done. No light at all is being emitted from the nuclear explosion, onto the character.
I’ve honestly seen “My first GFX” posts better than this, but I might be mistaken here. Perhaps this is one of your first GFX? In that case this would be acceptable, otherwise it is really not up to standards.
Thanks for your reply. I appreciate the points I should take care of next time. However, the way you chose it to phrase wasn’t quite right honestly. Criticising someone’s art doesn’t need to be always in negative.
When I went through your reply, I could clearly see that your words are right, but also quite demotivating. A beginner’s would be clearly loose his confidence in himself if he finds something like this in his replies.
The overall idea was meant to be silly. No one would do that. And the render was also not meant to be quite cinematic. No attempt was made there. It’s just the character eating a burger no caring about her surroundings. It means that she doesn’t bother about them.
Thanks for suggesting a color palette mate. But since it was made in a rush, I didn’t went through that. If I have to be honest, I originally planned that final product would look like the picture I had set in my mind. And I am happy about that
Thanks for suggesting that too. But I didn’t feel it necessary to do that. The explosion is meant to be quite far from the character.
And for the rest of it, I am glad that you pointed out all the spots that I need to take care of. If you can, I would like to see some of your creations too and you may help me out with my future projects too!
If you still have something to say about my opinions, I can’t deny you do so. But it would be even better if you are more positive in delivering it out.
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Right off the bat, I knew this would be a negative comment…
Your points are good, but it definitely feels more like a hate comment than constructive criticism. Heh…
I really like it! I don’t see much that needs to be improved upon, but maybe a little lighting from the explosion to the character would be nice and make it a ton better.
Overall great job!
This is one of the coolest GFX I saw this week, keep up the good work! Even better since you did it in 1 hour. RIP nitro tho
Casually eats burger while chaotic nuclear apocalypse occurs hahaha