avxocado
(scarlett)
June 2, 2020, 7:03am
#1
Hello! I am still very new to digital art and was hoping for some feedback on some of my first 2D gfx I have made. Please be detailed on what I should improve on, I don’t mind criticism as long as it is constructive. x
Also, do you think I am ready for paid commissions? Or should I wait and improve my art for a bit longer?
Here they are:
Thank you for your time
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anross
(anross)
June 2, 2020, 8:36am
#2
this looks amazing, good job!!
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Looks great! For paid commissions, i think you should improve for about a week. Many people will want a more experienced designers. But keep up the good work
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I really love your style. Your use of shading is really good! I do think you could improve a bit, for example, the chef hat on the girl looks weird:
It shouldn’t have that many bumps.
Here is a real chef hat as reference:
The third picture, the boys arm looks really stiff and tense:
Other than that I think you have amazing potential!
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avxocado
(scarlett)
June 2, 2020, 4:00pm
#5
Thank you for this! It helped a lot, I will try to improve these
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I am fliping…
You are AMAZING!
Keep doing your work, since you are Awesome!
At the moment you are the BEST of all of the Designs I saw!
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avxocado
(scarlett)
June 3, 2020, 8:28am
#7
Wow! Thank you, it means a lot. (:
Okay so, I added you on Discord as Arziio#4953
If we could discuss a little bit?
avxocado
(scarlett)
June 3, 2020, 8:35am
#9
Sure! I accepted, DM me what you would like to discuss.
Felterex
(Felterex)
June 3, 2020, 8:43am
#10
It was actually really good, nice work! Keep it up!!
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Hey!
I’m loving the pastel effect each of these have, giving them a nice character and raw feel.
Great work!
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lostlid
(lenny)
June 5, 2020, 12:49am
#13
Really nice work, if I wanted to be picky I’d say the hand in the last image is in a bit of an unnatural position. No hate though, I love these.
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I love your style im getting cutesy vibes maybe work on the hair more to make it look more natural
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This is in the wrong catagory. It belongs in the #help-and-feedback:cool-creations as it’s just seeking general feedback.
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The detail is AMAZING! I’m very impressed; you even took the time to add stray hairs on the characters!
Your art is very wonderful, and I can’t wait to see what you do next!
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avxocado
(scarlett)
June 5, 2020, 5:32pm
#17
ah, sorry my bad. I will fix it.
avxocado
(scarlett)
June 5, 2020, 5:35pm
#18
Thank you very much! I will put more updates on what I’ve made in the future.
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Cacexo
(cacexo)
June 24, 2020, 12:38pm
#19
how much per drawing
30 characters
avxocado
(scarlett)
June 24, 2020, 3:04pm
#20
DM me on either the dev forum - @avxocado or discord - scarlett#7834
We can discuss there.