Hi !!
So, last time i made a post about a gun that i made, it was very bad 
And today i decided to spend more time on building, here the result :
I need feedback ! 
Thank you !
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The new version is a hundred times better than the old one. Keep up the good work!
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I do agree @noobthenoobest , keep up the work! 
And in addition; You could try using bevel or smooth to smoothen the edges & give the gun some more trendy shape!
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It’s a really good attempt since you improved on your first model looking at the before and after image it’s good however, adding some minor details such as the trigger it seems a little to large maybe try making it a bit smaller in the front try placing a little hole for the muzzle of the pistol it may make your model look much better in a cartoony way. I do think it’s still in progress if I’m not mistaken, perhaps making the designs and parts on the grip exterior at the start it’s looking good, are you going for a realistic approach or a low poly look?
However, if you’re leaning more toward a more low poly / style, then I do think it looks pretty great. Possibly try to place some texture on the barrel or the entire model, but other than that, I don’t think there much to say since it’s still a work in progress model. Overall, nice job!
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The second version is a lot better than the first one! Keep up your good work, and who knows? Maybe one day you will become a pro at Blender 3D modeling!
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I have one advice.
See this? Make the trigger of the gun a bit smaller, kinda looks ugly.
But as always, keep up with the good work! 
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Personally, the gun looks a bit chunky and rough, you should add some smoother corners and make it a bit more thin.
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spend more time on it, it needs more on the side faces though
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