I like the lighting! You should create a room you cant walk into but has a weird glowing block or something, and it will leave the player wondering, maybe add a sound region to it too?
I feel like this needs more light. Is it a horror game. This the amount of light it looks like a horror game. I think it looks like the diner from umbrella academy in the fight scene with five. It also reminds me of stranger things.
I think its good! Here’s one thing you may need to improve on a little. Wall Decoration. Its a bit bland on the walls, so maybe add something that fits good with the area and can fit. Maybe some posters and maybe a pattern on the walls.