A building I done, would like some feedback

Hello, here’s a build I have done and would like some feedback on it.

Any feedback is useful.

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It looks amazing! Keep up the great work! :slight_smile:

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I really like your structures, if I had to pick my favorite it would probably be the fourth one.

I don’t see any other suggestions to give these were well done, maybe just keep working on them?

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I really do like everything about this except you should change the slate texture and get some custom texture in there to bring a little more life into the building and darken the color of the neon bricks or put a transparent peace in front so it doesn’t glow too much.

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Looks beautiful, for the pool you could add some detail on edges and maybe a stairway in of some sort it, keep it up!

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It looks beautiful overall, with very vibrant and varied architecture, but the use of neon in some areas is confusing.

In your 2nd picture, you can see windows on the face of a building. For example, this group.
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I’d guess you are going for what it seen in many glass panes found here.

It might make more sense to dim them a lot or have them uniform with the other windows, as well as all the parts made to represent a transparent material, since it’s slighty out of place and would fit in more with a darker setting.

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Asking for rating is considered spam, but I like your build.

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Sorry, first time ever posting on dev forum but I’ll make sure to keep it in mind, but thanks for all the kind feedback, and usefulness this has brought me to.

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I think you should look into using more differentiating textures, slate doesn’t seem to work with some of the objects on the screenshots.

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Looks really nice. Everything matches up and works well together. Good work! :+1:

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The lighting is on point, but what you could do to slitghtly improve it is to have different materials on the exterior as you have only used slate it makes it look kind of unrealistic and bland.

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