A cool character

i made a monster but all of them are just a black figure but i thought of something original

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The monster u made is cool and scary. And I love the star behind the monster.

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Could you make the picture a bit brighter so we can see it better?

From what I can see, it looks good just lacking some detail.

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Same. I only see the left arm and right arm. And the feet. But not the face or the hat

(hat) maybe I can see

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I can see the hat slightly, but it blends into the background and makes it to hard to give good feedback on it.

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sorry about the lighting though i didn’t know you couldnt see some parts

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yeah its a fedora actually since its suppose to hide its face

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Cool, good job though. It looks nice.

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Is that freddy from A Nightmare on Elm Street?

yeah its inspired by freddy kruger expect its not suppose to be as fleshy

Didn’t notice the flesh though.
I just noticed by the hat and the shirt

hmm, it’s kinda “cool” in some way.

But I just don’t know what it is.

it looks like a good-old normal Robloxian except it’s at night.

Here are some suggestions that you can probably change.

Maybe add some tiny, tentacles, behind it’s back.
Probably would look scary if there was a red-bright glare in one of the eye.

And should have it in the cold, dead streets in a small town.

But that’s all I have to say, good job!

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Got a question could u put the background Snow and put more stars? Not trying to be mean. Because the floor is white so what about the background?

yeah i think i should change it with a blizzard