YES I KNOW I MADE IT TOO BRIGHT FHDSKLAH
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It look really great, I personally like how the outfit of the character suits the background really well. Like you mentioned maybe make it a little less brighter. Overall I rate it a 9/10.
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Lighting is really cool, you are a very good GFX artist.
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The GFX is good you are a good GFX artist keep up good work
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Its nice, as you already know its too bright haha but I get where you were going, the couch and table seem a bit too small compared to the table! Overall this is pretty nice!
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Besides the brightness, the flower petals look out of place because they are 2D whilst everything else is 3D. Maybe find a better replacement or remove them completely. Otherwise, great job!
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I think it’s good. It’s better than anything I’ll ever do.
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Looks very nice and cool it looks well made and everything is spot on well done 
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thats a good work right there
its bright
jk its not
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Suggestions, the exposure needs to be brought down some, or like should be added within the light bulbs. The color scheme is cute but some colors aren’t complimenting the others, such as in variety. The mirror instead of black could be white or silver, and the leaf petals should vary between light and dark greens. I would suggest the rose petals being pink instead of red to compliment the light color contrast.
Overall, you’re very talented and this looks fantastic. Happy fall!
Looks good. I like the lighting but the dark part of the GFX needs more lighting. Great poses and atmosphere. Keep working!
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I turned the exposure to like 0.4 and it’s still that bright D:
Maybe it’s just the HDRI i’m using, idk
This GFX looks very good and detailed. However, I would still make it a little less brighter. Good Job!
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This GFX looks very good and detailed. But you Should make the light a little less bright. I hope she or he likes your fanart.
But yeah, Thank you for reading this. have a nice day!
It looks good. However, it seems as if you just slapped on an HDRi and expected it to work. You should play around with hdris and add some of your own custom lighting too. Some of the parts are also extremely overexposed and assaults your eyes. The composition could also use some work, reference the rule of 3rds. However, it is a kind of good looking GFX and I would love to see you improve in the future!
This was in Oct 2020. I’ve improved a lot since then, but thanks for the critique anyway.
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