Hey guys, my name is Scar and I want to introduce to you a tank that I had been building for over a past of 3 days, I would like have some feedbacks on it so that I will improve myself and become into a better builder.
I really like the way that you have created the track for the tank, I also really admire the fact that you have added details to the front of the tank. A few of my suggestions would be…
Using darker colors
Trying to add a bit more details
Try to use more unions for the front side of the tank
I think it could use some improvements, but it’s still alright.
Looks like you may have been going for the SU-152 Soviet SPG, so I would suggest the following.
The gun mantlet is really flat, definitely make it curvier, it would also help to add a small hole via negate parts to create a gunner’s sight
You wouldn’t really have the barrel a different color from the rest of the tank, so I would recommend making it the same or similar in color.
There is only one hatch on the top of the tank, this is not very realistic due to the possible loss of crew during a battle, normally there is more than one hatch.
The tank is awfully short and blocky overall, I recommend rounding it our and making it longer.
I appreciate how you tried to do the tracks, but the gaps between each piece is awfully large, try making it smaller.
I like the addition of the external fuel tanks, but they seem much too long.
Try adding some lights on the front so the crew can see in the dark, along with some periscopes on the hatches.
Try adding a muzzle break onto the end of the gun, this was a massive howitzer and would need something to help compensate with the recoil.
The suspension seems, unrealistic, this vehicle would have a very tough time crossing terrain, I would suggest adding more, smaller road wheels, along with the track moving part.
(More coming soon, I had to quickly get off)
Here’s an image of The Self-Propelled gun I’m speaking about:
