Hello, today, I was wondering if I could possibly get feedback on a hallway I have made, hopefully you all only give constructive criticism.
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Hi. This hallway has a nice ish vibe to it but a lot of things don’t really make sense or don’t fit. The mirrors (behind the pipes) look odd. The diamond plate thing in the hallway seems very janky. The pipes seemed to be cut off for some reason. The lights on the floor aren’t centered and theres a like… ramp? from where you took the picture. Also, the neon doesn’t really fit and I don’t even know what it is, same with the white thing on the left. I hope this helped.
it looks really good, well done. but you may need to work on the alignments a bit.
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The Room looks good but there is a thing that im not sure is intentional
These parts aren’t fully attached to the walls and to the ceiling
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Try messing around with the lighting a bit to make it look a little better with the “style” or “theme” of your hallway.
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Yeah, I was thinking of doing that, I don’t really like the lights, I feel like it ruined the vibe I was going for.
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Yeah, I really should, I’m still quite new to building and only have 9 months of experience, there’s always room to grow though!
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oh, alright then sorry for the confusion
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Try using custom textures. If you’re not going for a low poly style and you’re trying to achieve a realistic look, custom textures is the way. They don’t take too long to add and create a huge impact on the final outcome. The diamond plate material used in this build makes the build look clean, and new, while you’re trying to build a dirty broken down hallway (i’m assuming) , so getting a custom diamond plate texture with a pale colour and some dirt and dust on it would fix the problem. You can apply this method to every material you have in this and you should get much better results.
To be honest, i can’t really tell what you’re trying to build, and what type of theme it’s trying to represent. It looks sort of like an abstract art painting. Two perfectly clean, aligned and modern lights at some concrete stairs, pipes being held in place by some abstract looking empty concrete cylinders, random red striped lights with a plain cylinder top in the wall, and some sort of clean misplaced mirrors on either side of the corridor, all being mixed together in one build, makes me confused. It’s like a vacuum cleaner in the middle of a desert. It just doesn’t match.
I hope you take this criticism well, and improve from this.
Peace 
Looks good! Kind of like a spaceship?
Looks great, but are the pipes supposed to end or not? It would look better if the pipes ended.
