I have spent two years making a horror game; it is based on a combination of “Bendy and the Ink Machine,” and “Work at a Pizza Place.” I want fellow developers to give their completely honest opinion on it.
It’s fine. There are a few problems though.
1 - UI Scaling
You really need to find out how to use the “Scale” part of the UI. On my monitor it’s really small.
2 - Ambience
A lot of the ambience is repeated and very loud and annoying. Please try to find some more ambience sounds, and make the rain quieter.
3 - Unnecessary Parts
Why is there a “play button for mobile”? That is almost unnecessary if you try using using scale.
Okay, enough criticizing, to the good things.
1 - Tiny Spoop Got Me
Yeah, okay, you got me once.
2 - Creepy Atmosphere
I like the dark fog and the flashlight, really adds something to the game.
3 - Building
The main part of the game (that being the pizzeria) is from what I can tell, an original build, and yes, there are some free models, however the main building is nice.
Overall, 5.2/10
If you apply some of the things I said, this game could be better, and with a few UI and ambience spices, it can make the game very good. There are many things to be pleased with the game, and I like how you figured out how to put a custom shirt on the player.
Remember, “Bad scores are not supposed to make you give up, they are supposed to help you learn.” - TehEpikNoobKing (or Guest422349 or whatever, probably not an original quote.)
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Thank you, Guest! I’m glad someone liked it. 
All the criticism you gave I like to hear for improvement!