A map for my RPG game

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Hello! I need some feedback on this map I made.

Play here!: Roleplaying Game - Roblox

Warning! Lot’s of screenshots! :smiley:

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#2

Looks really good my dude. I can’t wait until it’s done.
The enemies could use some respawning and a storyline would be nice. I see what you were trying to do with the health. It needs some modification. maybe make a separate gui for the bubbles and animate it that way.

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#3

Looks Great! :tada: :tada: :tada:

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#4

Looks really good the GUI’s look really good as well.

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#5

Just so you know, the GUI isn’t mine I got it from a kit. And the enemies do respawn but they all don’t spawn in the same place. They spawn somewhere else on the map.

#6

Ah. Ok. How do I get the staff? I have no idea how.

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#7

You can buy it from this person here.

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Also, you where right about the enemies not spawning in! Ill fix that. Thanks!!

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#8

How do I buy it. I tried clicking on him. Do I press E? I need help.

#10

The first few images look way to close to other game’s store/NPC-areas. But other than that, this game looks awesome! The icons look great, the tool names sound different, and the trees look stunning.

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#11

Sure. I’ll test it.

The bows are broken. I think it’s weird that the goblins spawn in the safe area. Pretty good though. I like the diverse array of quests so far. I hope you make this rpg less grindy then the others. Crafting and alchemy would be a good thing to add in the future.

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#12

The GUI and the maps looks good, but the health bar needs a little improvement.

#13

Does he eat cheerios?? :rofl: :rofl:

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#14

What? I don’t get it. What do you mean?

#15

It was a joke from a post from yesterday

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#16

Oh. Still odd to post that an hour ago.

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#17

Looks pretty good! I think that you should change the layout of the market area.

#18

That’s not finished yet. I’ll add a real layout later. :smiley:

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#19

Looks great! I love the detailed low-poly style! One improvement I would make is to change the ui on the bottom to maybe be icons? (Not trying to criticize, lol) Anyway, nice job!

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#20

The map looks amazing! Good job!

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#21

Ah. That makes sense cause it’s being worked on.