A Quick Homestore <3

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#1

Hello everyone! This is a fairly quick build, it’s a little home store. Any feedback is much appreciated! It’s not the best as its a quick build.

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Game Link: [FOR SALE] Small Homestore - Roblox

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#2

It looks very cute!
My only suggestion is to make the wood thinner on the counter (I’d say around 0.25) and have concrete connecting it to the brick.

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#3

Thanks for the feedback! I’ll see how that looks soon.

#4

Okay I added that idea and it looks much much better!
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#5

The lighting could be… not so bright and more :sparkles: aesthetic :sparkles:
Also I’d add a frame on the windows, an exterior & interior sill on it as well.
Maybe a carpet? :d
it looks nice tho.

#6

Looks great, what I would do is make the neon blocks lighting a little bit lower and also maybe change the wall textures might just be me but I don’t really like brick on the inside! :grinning:

#7

Seems very bright maybe fix that, a little aesthetic floor and lighting would be nice! Other else it looks great!

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#8

Homestore wow
Homestore wow1774×824 1.35 MB

haha yeah I went a bit over board on lighting, it looks like this on 10 graphics though :flushed:

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#9

  1. Use “Future” lighting technology for best experience. Then, make the light on the right a bright surfacelight with 5-12 brightness.

  2. Add more details to the window. I recommend looking at real window designs.

  3. Maybe add a cashier at the counter? Just gotta be a keyboard and monitor.

  4. Perhaps add a turnstile so you can’t just run behind the counter. They’re everywhere in real life.

  5. The clothing rack should use more colours to improve its design.

This is quite a good homestore. 6.2/10

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#10

Thank you, I’m currently working on a cafe project which will have 100x the detail of this quick build, its also using the studio beta :wink:

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