i made this:
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Hello.
I’d like to say this looks nice.
Maybe you can alter the lighting to add a “darker” feeling to it?
And quite possibly more details?
Anyways good luck
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change the proportions and good work with the decorations but theyre floating and darker lighiting and shadowmap would be cool and its a bit too filled so maybe add wires and pipes of electricty switch of something on the wall
I agree with @Unphases since the lighting is indeed a bit too bright. You might also want to add some more detail, or maybe add more crates. You might also want to add something welded to the walls, etc.
I don’t see any cardboard crates. Is this hallway supposed to be a storage hallway or something else?
Nice job on the hallway!
looks pretty good, not gonna question the giant DUMMY tags in the back.
anyways (like most of the comments say, ikr im adding so much for this suggestion!!) make the lighting a lot, lot darker.
also something that isn’t to noticeable but still im gonna mention it: there is way to much stuff for a scp styled area. i mean if it were to be uncivillized and have these scary monsters, there would probably be about 6-8 random things thrown around and dark which a monster could hide behind. if there is so much stuff, it just seems unfitting for such a setting. idk just my opinion. haha
- did not have enough time to finishh it but thanks for the feedback!*
use shadow map and use point light its gonna be quick
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Lower the exposure a bit or the brightness on the top right there is a few mis scalled lines on the first pic
This is meant to be a hallway, yet it’s designed like a maze. I suggest clearing up the path, adding variation with assets and making the lighting slightly darker.
Also, don’t overuse DiamondPlate, it doesn’t look that appealing and the shelves, for example, would be better off with a metal material.
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I’d recommend correcting a few things within the build, such as a few instances of box clipping (left boxes in Image: 1) and unrealistic stationary positioning (bottom left box in Image: 2 ).
Another thing you could do is to substitute the lighting technology with Future or Shadowmap and possibly substituting the DiamondPlate material with something else such as metal.
Otherwise, the build itself is quite nice!
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It looks decent but looks too basic.
Maybe adjust the lighting and add more detail to the build.
That’s all have to say, well done. 
Yeah. It’s an old build now(since its like 2 months old). I have more better projects int he works.
Also I made this in like 15 minutes
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