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This is just a big step for the map, however this map has gone through many updates, including this one, this update is more about oceans, ships and marine life.
Besides, water dams were added, and a factory, in my plans I plan to add many more places, but the time is not yet :building_construction:. :desert_island:. :stadium:. :factory:. :earth_africa:
Let me know your opinion or suggestion

Thanks for reading (sorry for many images)
- murjarquitecto

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I really like your the city, the dam, the factory, the Golden Gate Bridge and the underwater ship are all very cool additions.

I’m curious to know whats the part count on your map?

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I suggest you move the octopus colliding with the Roblox terrain elsewhere and also add really tall seaweed/coral reef areas underwater. The octopus on top of the rusty sunken boat/building thing is awesome though!

Great map and it is really what I like to see because it has detail, but it maintains that unique Roblox vibe. Awesome work! :octopus:

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This looks really well built, I really like the underwater part and what you did with it. Is this a build of a city with a dam connected?

This is a small suggestion, but I suggest adding food to the Gas Station if you don’t have it already, as some do have food in them and I think it would be a nice little detail to add.

I also agree with what @GGGGG14 said, maybe add the octopus colliding with the terrain maybe to on the sand to look like it is relaxing? I don’t however know a lot about the octopus species, but it would maybe be nice to add into the build.

Of course, this build is amazing! Good job.

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I will gladly take the suggestions and yes, the city and the islands are connected to the dams and I’m glad you liked it.

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Wow, this map is stunning! I have no suggestions, its almost perfect.

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Nice builds , keep up the good work

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