Hello!
I’ve been developing a game called Dune Buggy Driving - Roblox and right now I am making a Wild West Level for it. How does this house look?
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I don’t really get what the writing on top says, and I was expecting something a little bit more detailed and textures when I saw this (eg. windows, interior, etc.).
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The text is gibberish and ill try to make it better.
It’s a decent start but I’m personally not a big fan of the overall design, It’s a bit bland TBH, try detailing it with some windows and textures as @IceTheOneAndOnly said. I’d remove the symbols on the roof altogether, maybe add some roof tiles.
@IceTheOneAndOnly and @ComplicatedParadigm I’ve reworked it to Ice’s reference image
here’s how it looks:
IT looks better! except this top part:
is looking weird, and it looks like the floor goes beneath the house.
What do I do about the top part?
make it more 3d, extend it backwards (a little more, or just fully)
Okay! Thanks! Can I add windows?
of course! its your creation after all. also, I can’t really see the door.
Maybe remove the gibberish on the sign and it would look sort of better.
Looks good so far. I tried the game - like the way the dune buggies move!