Abandoned Railroad Tracks [CLOSED]

I created a game that takes place in eastern Washington state, with an abandoned railroad track that has been abandoned for over 30 years. This is my first time messing with lighting and atmosphere.

Here is the game: Game

Feedback is appreciated.

Please note the following things:

  • The game is still being developed.

  • The white thing in the middle of the tracks is for measuring the distance between tracks.

EDIT
The game has now closed, thank you to those who gave me feedback.

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Try to add more detail into the game, especially to the road. Good work though! :+1:

Yeah, I am planning on adding road lines and a house or two with a few trees.

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Love the lighting but the game is generally empty and undetailed.

Like I said, the game isn’t complete yet, but I am planning on adding MUCH more to the game.

The game makes exilent use of lighting however the map itself is far too barren.
Using roblox’s terrain may benefit the map if you don’t wish to place a bunch of parts to slope out and detail the terrain.

The demon looks to the sky, wishing to return too it's home. Yet deep down it knows that the sins it has committed will never let it return

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It is good. But the music is just very good and good to listen to its like just perfect

it would be nice to make a sitting emote so if anyone rly wants to listen to the sound track u can sit on the ground admire the song. and standing just makes it look akward