Hello! I my friend asked me to create a ad for his group, so I did what he told me. I would just like some feedback on which one you think is better or what I can improve on!
My Friend’s Group
Thank you for your feedback!
Ok so basically I edited it to make it look better
Hmm. It looks a bit plain. Perhaps you could add some detail.
Basically 2 blurred up red circles and a 2 blurred black circle. Not that interesting tbh. Add texts, give it it’s own life lol. It’s very very VERY plain & needs more detail added onto it.
Maybe resize the eyes and add some text to make someone interested, because if i saw i would not press on it my opinion if u feel like i was rude i am very sorry.
It’s two red circles, if I saw this I wouldn’t know what’s going on and ignore it.
Maybe add some short text like: " He is back" or " EREBUS’S REVENGE". This could attract more people.
Also if you want it to be creepier, you could add an ominous smile along with it.
I would just straight ignore it ngl
What details would make it more interesting in your opinion?
Thanks! I am curious of what details you would think would give make the ad more interesting?
I don’t think many will click on it since it’s just two red circle, maybe give a title or context to what the game is in the ad. Possibly a drawing with more to it.
Like many other’s I agree that this is quite plain maybe add some more detail.
I personally wouldn’t really click this. Maybe tell what the group is about!
It is a group btw, and I have an updated version here-
Looks better whit the words, but i would chage the eyes and make them more realistic, since they are just 2 red donuts and eyes have an elliptical shape.
i was making ads for my group and clothings and this happened
