Ads I made to promote some Christmas-themed clothes


Those are just some concepts, they are not finished.

What do you think of these 728x90 ads?
Apologies for the image quality.

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Remove the “Join Group” part (Its very out of place)

Why didn’t you change the text color when the background was red? It’s like having grey with a black background

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Thank you for your comments and suggestions. I want to clarify that what I presented earlier was just an initial concept, and I will not make any further modifications to that specific design. However, I appreciate your feedback, and I will be posting other concepts and designs soon on the Roblox forum. I hope you can review them and provide additional feedback. Thank you for your interest!

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They look pretty good, but some changes I’d make would be:

  • Centre the join group button: as Block Bros mentioned, it looks very out of place. Maybe centre it between All and 5 Robux? Otherwise it might be best to remove it
  • Add more details to the background: I think the backgrounds look really nice, but adding some extras like a background textured outline or more texture in the background (swirls of colour for example) would really tie the design together.
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