Adventure Boss // My game

[Ethanytb250 (KayzenTop)]

Hey! Im working on my old game, and made some updates, can you give me feedbacks

Adventure Boss

[Pish85 (rip_Zephyr)]

Okay so uh…

Text not centered

You misspelled “Adventure”

You misspelled “Better”

I also noticed varying minecraft assets and differing build styles.

Chatting with noob doesn’t work

Sometimes, the rocks and lava don’t kill you.

Also, the first 3 jumps are too hard, could easily drive players away.

If I click reset and die, I respawn at the checkpoint I was at before I reset.

These could all be factors as to why your game is failing.
If you improve on these, your game could see some success.

[Ethanytb250 (KayzenTop)]

Hey! Thanks for your review, uhmm so im gonna fix all of these bugs tomorrow, i know the game is not perfect, i did my best while i was alone to make my game, and for my grammar on the game, it’s normal, im french, but i try my best to not mispel words, this review helped me.

[Ethanytb250 (KayzenTop)]

For the lava and rocks that does not kill you, it’s not my fault, it’s the game that lags i think…

[Ethanytb250 (KayzenTop)]

Bug fixes

1 - Fixed the UI not centered, scaled it

2 - Fixed the mispel text

3 - Fixed the Minecraft tree and did put it in another biome

3 - Removed the NPC

4 - Fixed the first 3 jumps

5 - Fixed scripts

[Ethanytb250 (KayzenTop)]

@Pish85 srry for da mention, could you try the game to see if everything is fixed?

[Pish85 (rip_Zephyr)]

There’s still a minecraft furnace in the 3rd stage:

A bit of Z-Fighting with the door and the grass:

When the player spawns in, you should remove their forcefield. Because…

Also, you mispelled better:

The lava in 3rd stage should probably kill you instantly, not tick damage:

Also, the glitch with the reset trick is still there.

@Pish85

If I click reset and die, I respawn at the checkpoint I was at before I reset.

[Ethanytb250 (KayzenTop)]

For the furnace it’s juste the theme of the place, the mispeled word “better” idk on what gui it is
the reset bug idk how to fix it, and i can’t fix everything for the whole cuz of school

[Pish85 (rip_Zephyr)]

The mispelled word “better” is on the death screen when you are killed.

For the respawning, are you using a checkpoint system?

If so, when the player resets, set their checkpoint to 0 (or 1)

[boterflic5]

The Controls are very awkward to use on mobile with them all being on the same side, it would be better to put Left and Right buttons to the left , and Jumping button to the right

[HollywoodPLUS (Andrew)]

Your game is decent. It reminds me of the Roblox Studio template called Line Runner. I’m not gonna go into depth, but it’s super easy to beat and the collectable coins scattered across the map serve no purpose. I do see potential, but it needs a lot of work.

[Pish85 (rip_Zephyr)]

Here’s some extra things I noticed

Although the background is moving, the menu screen still seems kind of boring.

You also forgot to anchor these blocks

[Ethanytb250 (KayzenTop)]

I’m gonna fix those bugs today

[Ethanytb250 (KayzenTop)]

Okay, I’m gonna change them, the positions

[Ethanytb250 (KayzenTop)]

Thanks for your review, the coins should serve for some game powers, items, and il the game is easy to beat, but an hard mode should come soon

[Ethanytb250 (KayzenTop)]

Okay thanks, yea I use a checkpoint system

[Ethanytb250 (KayzenTop)]

Fixed a part of the things you said ! @boterflic5 @Pish85 @HollywoodPLUS