Hello! I’ve made an adventure game I’ve been wanting to create for a while. It is inspired by works such as A Roblox Quest, Roblox Adventure, Adventure Forward and other games during 2014 - 2018.
Token Traveller: Corrupted Entity
Currently it is not finished but if you crave for a new adventure, then you can play the first world right now!
Token Traveller: Corrupted Entity (Link to game)
Here’s the thumbnail:
Let me know what you think.
I played through some of it and it definitely looks like something someone spent a lot of time on! There’s a cohesive theme and style which I like, and you’ve enticed people with random things to do and random people to talk to and random vents in the ceiling 
. I also like your GUIs and you’ve implemented them well (I was playing on mobile).
Keep working on it and if you want to monetize it, I would recommend going with the “collection” strategy where players are trying to collect as many varied things as possible. Articles of clothing, mystical artifacts, etc.
I would also recommend making the death spawn shorter, perhaps to 1 second rather than 5. Since you have some hazardous quests in there, dying can become tedious if it happens a lot.
Overall good job and make a Discord group for your game so you can build an audience!
