Hi, i just ended up a cool game i started a lot of time ago, because i couldn’t go on, so i just i ended up giving up. During september i found it, and decided to countinue it with the knowledge i gained in the meantime, tell me what you think of it 
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Click here to play: Frog Madness - Roblox
The game is consists in a hunter chasing the players around different maps. The hunter must click on a player to take their lifes. every player has 3 lifes. The player has to survive 'till the end. The player also has a sensor on their back which becomes redder the more the hunter is close to a player.
I would be happy to hear some advices from other developers, from the profile picture, to the animations, to the maps, to the skins, to bugs, to anything else. Nobody joins so if you also have advices on how to make it more attractive please let me know!
Bring your friends if you want, so it will be funnier and someone will join!
Also, please leave a like if you enjoied the game, because a lot of people joined the game when it was not ready yet and left a lot of dislikes 
. Thank you for reading, i hope you’ll give it a try 
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The concept itself doesn’t seem bad although your genre is a bit repetitive, which isn’t your fault. It’s another murderer chases victims game which people tend to want more of a unique approach when it comes to playing anything.
If you want better monetization, I suggest making mobile support as the majority of roblox players tend to be on mobile devices. You could try to make it for Xbox however, the demographic is very low for that platform.
EDIT: You may want to make the victims animals to go with the theme of a hunter hunting prey.
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This is a very neat game, although it reminds me of Piggy. However, here are my suggestions:
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I didn’t really know what to do when I joined, so you could possibly add a tutorial
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I didn’t know where to go during the map voting, so maybe some type of arrow that points you in the direction could be helpful
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I see that you have HD admin in the corner, it looks a bit unprofessional so you may want to get rid of it if possible
I only got to play with someone for one round so I’m not sure if this next part applies:
- If players are teleported back to the lobby once the frog gets them, they may get bored, as there isn’t much to do. In the lobby, you may want to add an obby or game of some sort, and maybe some way for them to spectate players.
Also, if I am correct, a player must survive five minutes against the frog in order to win. This may get pretty repetitive to players, as there’s nothing to do but run. If there was some other way for players to escape, such as solving a random puzzle or etc, it might make the gameplay a lot more enjoyable.
For example, in Piggy you must find keys all over the map to open doors and such, collecting more items to escape. Or in Flee the Facility, you must “hack” computers to unlock the exit. I’m not saying you have to do these exactly, as these are only examples. But if there was something like that in your game, it might be more intense and fun for players.
I know this is a lot of feedback, but these are only my thoughts, which you may choose to use or ignore. But overall this is a great game, and I sincerely wish you the best of luck for it! Good job!
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I gave your game a try and a like.
I could not play because it requires at least two players, and I was the only player in the lobby.
It would be nice if Roblox would “burst” a game on their site as soon as one player joins it who is not the creator, to help new games get started.
Of course you could make a single player mode, but the point of many Roblox games is the social multiplayer element. So it would be better to support that.
It looks quite professional, when it comes to the artwork and build.
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thank you, i appreciate all the feedbacks you gave me! i guess i didn’t quite understand why the HD admin thing looks unprofessional tho, i certainly can remove it, i just didn’t quite catch the reason.
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Personally, I wouldn’t plague my game with an admin script which has capabilities that they won’t let me see. HD admin seems unprofessional as any player can see the panel but they are unable to use the commands. Most simulators and tycoons use it to give people VIP commands which give people an incentive to want to purchase commands to play with. Don’t quote me on this but I just don’t think HD admin is very good for a professional game. If you could get rid of all the GUIs it had from the player’s view, which I’m sure you can but it’s not made obvious, then I’d say it would be okay.
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Your a great builder and this game looks amazing. However I think there are some edits that need to be done.
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MAP BUGS: In Candy Cane Land, whenever you touch the chocolate river: your character never stops bouncing.
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TUTORIAL: When I joined as a survivor: I had no idea what I was doing or how I could avoid the frog.
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UI NAVIGATION: It’s hard to navigate around your shop. Try improving your shop so it’s easier to navigate for players.
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TRAPS: I couldn’t use traps as the froggy. They are broken at the moment and need to be fixed.
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CHALLANGES: There are no challenges for the survivors to do, other than run from the frog. If your going to a flee-the-facility theme your going to need challenges. They are important to game development and making your game fun.,
This game has potential to grow, Good luck developer!
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