Hello! I just finished making a modern/aesthetic cafe and would like some feedback on it. I’ve left the game link below, thanks for reading! 
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It’s really not “aesthetic” it’s pretty dull, extremely basic and overall, kinda bad…
The roof is too short.
The title isn’t true.
The music is way too loud.
The planks are weird.
The planks should be farther in the ground.
The island is too small.
There is no tables to sit on.
The cafe is way too small, most of it is just counters.
Overall, not a pleasant game.
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Great feedback, thank you! I will address it shortly. 
I suggest adding a sunset or an aesthetic skybox use terrain and change the color of the water, make it more realistic
Great suggestions, thanks! I’ll work on that soon.
The music blasts my ears off, free models, no usage of blender, regular studio textures.
Overall, it’s not very eye pleasing or “aesthetic/modern”. I wouldn’t play again.
Ok, thanks for the feedback! I’ll work on improving. 
It looks pretty simple, nothing really different with it, maybe add another floor, some cool looking stairs to it, use of free models. Try using blender like @zCrxtix said, good luck.
The following is meant to be taken as constructive criticism.
- It’s too small
- The ceiling is too short
- You should add another story
- No real tables
- The material is not “aesthetic”, use smooth plastic for the build
- The structure should be primarily made of blocks, but the props (chairs/tables/etc) should be modeled
wouldnt call it “aesthetic” or even modern.
maybe i wouldnt even use the word cafe
Blender shouldn’t ever signify that a game looks good. I know a lot of people that have made really really good builds without the use of blender at all. Blender should never classify a games quality.
To the OP, @AnotherScriptStudio
It seems like your game got updated, personally I find it looks a lot better. I recommend you take more advantage of lighting effects (ColorCorrection, Bloom, Blur, Atmosphere, Clouds)
Otherwise pretty good building for a start to a cafe!
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Thank you! I’ll work on adding more effects.
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So it’s a good start! I feel like details are lacking and the roof could be a bit higher. The color scheme is ok, it’s just a little mixed up. Same with textures. Just a few touch ups etc. would be good!
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