An attempt at making a place have an atmosphere

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#1

After playing a few horror games on ROBLOX I’ve deiced I’ll attempt to make a really simple one and try to give to an atmospheric feeling of death awaiting behind each door, I think I did a good job for my first try at creating a horror game even if it is small.

Well, here’s the place : http://www.roblox.com/--place?id=156930300 , hoping to hear feedback on how to improve the place. (Other then make smoother animations)

P.s. Repsawn after getting a white screen. (Apparently, you cannot resume control and return the camera to the player in the same script anymore)

#2

Was this by any chance inspired by Dead Space? :3

#3

If you need help with this game let me know
I love horror games

#4

Or me, anyway, really nice, :P. I didn’t get scared at all really, but make it into a game and it will give that more ominous feeling. I found three of those death scenes, do I win?

#5

4 actually, no you lose, you missed one.

#6

4 actually, no you lose, you missed one.[/quote]

The one next to the hanging dead body? :stuck_out_tongue:

#7

That’s actually quite nice. What song was used? :stuck_out_tongue:

#8

Death Scenes :
1.) Fat wall hugger.
2.) The tounger (dead body sitting next to the door)
3.) Fleshblob.
4.) And then the grabber (Behind another door :P)

And the song used for it is actually the trailer from SCP Containment Breach, but here’s the link to it :
http://www.roblox.com/SCP-Containment-Breach-Trailer-item?id=155600341

#9

This is scarin me man.

#10

Those transparent bricks with the duty decals that are in-front of the camera are a huge issue, weld all of them to the camera, so that it isn’t chunky.