An opinion for the model I made (Updated)

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#1

Hello!:wave:
These days I have been offline for obvious reasons, apart today I am back to bring you something new that I did and that you will surely like, it is a model of a cargo ship in the ocean, give me your opinion or suggestion
However, in a few days I will make more models of ships in different biomes such as the Antarctic or in a port :anchor::ship:

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#2

this is extreamly cool, i love the detail, i have no suggestions. may i ask what are you planning on doing with these models becouse i would love to play a game that takes place on this boat

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#3

Well, these models I am designing for a game on a very large island that you can already go to check but I still need to make them move and a utility with them as well as an interior

#4

that sounds cool, il probably play it

#5

This is the island…

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#6

the epicness that those images are too much

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#7

Wow this is so Beautiful , maybe the cargo ship can have a little bit more detail but all the build are pretty well done ! :grinning:

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#8

This is really nice and professional model, are you doing this for experience or just to have work to show? or what game are you gonna work on?

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#9

Well, I choose the 2 things since it is from experience and I am going to add it to the images that were previously shown

#10

If the trees were more realistic, I would not think this was on ROBLOX. This is really cool!

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#11

Pretty good, I like it! Amazing work.

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#12

Done, it’s already added to the map, just make it move and shoot

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#13

Really Nice map, love it Should be used in a roblox game.

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#14

Interesting however cargo ships don’t feature any types of weapons implemented on the ship this is something you’ll see on a battle - war ship area. Although this is good I would throw more containers on the build so it could look more detailed you could even add widows in the back and spice it up a bit, it feels in my opinion odd since they’ve essentially been reproduced in your own type of style.

I recommend making various types of containers and using other objects/bolts to fill up the cargo flooring area ( Depending if your going for a smaller version). Good use of vibrant colors and overall structure it kind of has that resemblance of another cargo ship.

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#15

Thanks for the suggestions, and about the turrets it was a Jailbreak inspired idea

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#16

A very good job with a cargo ship

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