Animation i made, funny or not, smooth or not?

this is the no audio one.
the one with audio has a little loud audio

anyways yeah

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basicly what kids what to sell things for
COME GET LEMON AID ITS CHEAP, OLNY 7000 DOLLARS
good vid

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I think you can improve the parts where your character is out of breath, you can make torso, arms, and head move in a realistic way to show breathing. I see you tried to make the characters more human by doing actions, however they stop right before they talk, which is something that feels a little off. other than that this is a nice animation!

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