Is this good or maybe i still need to improve it…?
Thats all
atleast i tried
( Second time doing this )
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Background (same)
Lighting needs improvement
7/10 might return again
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Tysm for those who respond on my feedback and i really appreciated it
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Anyway. you gotta improve on this tbh. I giving you a high rating to keep ya motivated. keep on the good work if possible.
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the pose is a lot better than the last one, the lighting needs improvement as the dark areas are just completely black, also it’s quite blurry and not clear
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You should raise the sword with the other hand because it looks open for no reason or change to a pose that the sword does not look so low
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The lighting is slightly dull and uneven as the image appears quite blurry looking, what kind of software you used to produce your graphic design in? From the looks of it, this kind of looks like it was thrown in a (editing software) and edited focusing on the image and low quality it’s set in.
If this is an improved version of your previous made one I encourage you into learning and experimenting with lighting and different effects, to add a bit of realism to the scene you could even throw a more vibrant background image with some props around the area.
Whether it’s more of a practice sort of design or something you’re improving on. Add some shadows and other elements of brighter lighting to increase the quality of the image there is still space for improvement, continue to work on it more further. 
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